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English Department
Developmental Writing/Reading Program Presents:

New Voices Interactive
Like its namesake New Voices, New Voices Interactive is a collection of student essays from the Developmental Writing Program at California State University, Northridge that is used in developmental classes to demonstrate that hard work and clear thinking can result in essays of surprising depth and creativity. The essays also serve to model the types of writing that are expected of English 098 and English 097 students.

New Voices Interactive uses online student essays to demonstrates particular writing techniques such as transitional phrases, in-text citations, or narrative devices and then highlights them within the text. In addition, grammatical problems are highlighted in select essays (not student-written) as a way of focusing on the most common trouble areas for student writers. These visual demonstrations enable the student to clearly see the placement and integration of a variety of rhetorical and structural strategies, as well as troublesome grammar problems.

In addition to the annotated essays, visitors to this site will find a variety of helpful grammar exercises and writing prompts to help improve student writing. We have tried to make this site as user-friendly and accessible as possible. We invite you to come in, sit a spell, and browse around for what will be most helpful to you. According to Ernest Hemingway, the aim of writing should be “to put down on paper what I see and what I feel in the best and simplest way.” We hope this interactive site will help you do just that.

These student essays were chosen (or written by faculty) to illustrate a variety of writing elements.  Each example is only a sampling of these elements.  We leave it to you to discover more...

Telling Our Stories:     Narrative Essays

Connecting to Texts:    Text-based Essays
Speaking Our Minds:    Persuasive Essays
Sample Annotated Bibliography
Additional Essays for Exploration

Definitions:   Rhetorical, Structural, Stylistic, Grammar, and Mechanical Elements


Exercises from Diana Hacker


Links
CSUN English Department Home Page
Developmental Writing/Reading Program
CSUN Library
CSUN Learning Resource Lab
New Voices Home Page
OWL (Online Writing Lab at Purdue University)
MLA Documentation at OWL
Urban Legends Debunked



New Voices Interactive Committee Members:
Lisa Riccomini, Mary Marca, Sandra Jackson, Amy Reynolds, Jacqui Meisel, and Mary Shannon

Thank you to the Judge Julian Beck Instructional Developmental and Scholarship of Teaching and Learning Project Grant.

Thank you also to Bedford St. Martin's Press www.dianahacker.com site and the Writing Lab at Purdue for use of their materials.

And most of all, thank you Pamela Bourgeois, Sandra Jackson, and the Developmental Reading/Writing Program of the
Department of English for securing the grant for this project.


Team  Leader     lisa.d.riccomini@csun.edu

Web Administrator     mary.e.shannon@csun.edu