Definitions
Many of these definitions are adapted from Purdue’s
OWL
Rhetorical
Elements:
Dialogue Vocal
exchange between two or more characters. One of the ways in which plot, character,
action, etc. are developed.
Flashback Rhetorical device
used in narrative involving shifts in time.
Setting
Setting involves the location, historical period and socio-political
context of when the story occurs.
Characters The author's expression
of a character's personality through the use of action, dialogue, thought,
or commentary by the author or
another character.
Tone/Voice
Suggests an attitude toward the subject which is communicated by the
words the author chooses. Part of the range of tone includes playful,
somber, serious, casual, formal, ironic. Important because it designates
the mood and effect of a work.
Description Using vivid details shows
the reader what someone or something is really like. Often description relates
someone or something to one or
more of the five senses so that the reader can
relate more clearly.
Explanation/Example To support
your points, illustrate them by providing clear examples and discussing the
relationship between your ideas and
your examples.
Process Analysis Explains how to do something or how something
happens.
Comparison/Contrast Analyzing a subject by putting it next to
another and investigating similarities through comparison and differences
through
contrast
Cause/Effect By looking at causes, we investigate
reasons why something has happened. By looking at effects we investigate
and analyze what will
or potentially will happen.
Definition A formal
definition is based upon a concise, logical pattern that includes as much
information as it can within a minimum amount of
space. It consists of three parts:
The term (word or phrase) to be defined; the class of object or concept to
which the term belong; the
differentiating characteristics
that distinguish it from all others of its class.
Persuasion/Argument In an argument you are making a claim
about a topic and justifying this claim with reasons and evidence. This claim
could be
an opinion, a policy proposal, an evaluation,
a cause-and-effect statement, or an interpretation.
Irony
A rhetorical device a writer uses by stating the opposite of
what he or she really means. Often irony is associated with sarcasm and is
used for effect.
Audience Knowing
who your are writing for determines the tone of your message, the specificity
of your language and the development of your
supporting details.
Point of View The vantage point from which the
author presents action of the story. Who is telling the story? An all-knowing
author? A voice limited
to the views of one character? The
voice and thoughts of one character? Does the author change point of view
in the story? Why? Point
of view is often considered the technical
aspect of fiction which leads the critic most readily into the problems and
meanings of the story.
Opposing View/Refutation In a good argument
paper, you should anticipate opposing viewpoints, address them directly and
counter them in a
reasonable fashion in order to convince
your reader of the validity of your argument.
Structural Elements
Thesis statement/purpose of narration
A thesis statement is a very specific statement. It should cover only
what you want to discuss in your
paper, and be supported with specific evidence. The scope
of your paper will be determined by the length of your paper and any other
requirements that might be in place. The kind of thesis
that your paper will have will depend on the purpose of your writing. For
example,
narratives often contain only an implied thesis statement.
Thesis development/purpose of narration You
can think of your thesis development as a map or a guide both for yourself
and your audience to
make sure your paper argues your thesis well.
Introduction An introduction should
get the attention of your audience and introduce your topic with a strong
thesis.
Conclusion The conclusion
should bring your essay to a natural closure. Several “concluding” techniques
include highlighting the most important
issue in new light; asking a question of your audience;
or calling readers to action
Evidence/Supporting Details Evidence
includes appropriate examples, concrete evidence from outside sources and
offering strong explanation and
details of your main points.
Topic Sentence A topic sentence is
a sentence that indicates in a general way what idea or thesis the paragraph
is going to deal with. Although not
all paragraphs have clear-cut topic sentences, and despite
the fact that topic sentences can occur anywhere in the paragraph (as the
first
sentence, the last sentence, or somewhere in the middle),
an easy way to make sure your reader understands the topic of the paragraph
is
to put your topic sentence near the beginning of the paragraph.
(This is a good general rule for less experienced writers, although it is
not
the only way to do it).
Organization Organization and coherence
is the trait that makes the paragraph easily understandable to a reader.
You can help create coherence in
your paragraphs by creating logical bridges: The same
idea of a topic is carried over from sentence to sentence.
Transitions/Unity Transitional devices
are like bridges between parts of your paper. They are cues that help the
reader to interpret ideas in the way
that you, as a writer, want them to understand. Transitional
devices help you carry over a thought from one sentence to another, from
one
idea to another, or from one paragraph to another with
words or phrases. And finally, transitional devices link your sentences and
paragraphs together smoothly so that there are no abrupt
jumps or breaks between ideas.
Paraphrase Paraphrase involves
putting a passage from source material into your own words. A paraphrase
must also be attributed to the original
source. Paraphrased material is usually shorter than the
original passage, taking a somewhat broader segment of the source and condensing
it slightly.
Summary Summary
involves putting the main idea(s) into your own words, including only the
main point(s). Once again, it is necessary to attribute
summarized ideas to the original source. Summaries are
significantly shorter than the original and take a broad overview of the
source
material.
Analysis Analyzing means breaking down
an issue or an idea into its component parts, evaluating the issue or idea,
and presenting this breakdown
and evaluation to your audience. An analytical thesis
statement will explain:
Mechanics Correct use of punctuation helps
makes sure meaning will not get lost.
Quotation/MLA style Quotations Quotes
must be identical to the original, using a narrow segment of the source.
They must match the source
document word for word. In MLA style, referring to the
works of others in your text is done in two ways. When you make reference
to
someone else's idea, either through paraphrasing or quoting
them directly, you: provide the author's name (or the title of the work)
and the
page (or paragraph) number of the work in a parenthetical
citation. You also must provide full citation information for the work in
your
Works Cited list.
MLA Works Cited The works cited
list should appear at the end of your essay. It provides the information
necessary for a reader to locate and be
able to read any sources you cite in the essay. Each source
you cite in the essay must appear in your works-cited list; likewise, each
entry
in the works-cited list must be cited in your text.
Stylistic Elements
Word Choice Choose words that clearly and
concisely express your meaning. Don’t rely on vague language or clichés
with no meaning
Sentence Variety Put clauses and phrases with dependent
markers at the beginning of some sentences instead of starting each sentence
with the
subject. Vary the rhythm by adding transitional words
at the beginning of some sentences. Vary the rhythm by alternating short
and long
sentences.
Active Voice/Passive Voice In sentences
written in active voice, the subject performs the action expressed in the
verb; the subject acts. For
example, the iguana played with the cat. In sentences
written in passive voice, the subject receives the action expressed in the
verb; the
subject is acted upon. The agent performing the action
may appear in a "by the . . ." phrase or may be omitted. For example, the
game was
lost by the team.
Parallelism Parallel structure means using
the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level
of importance. This can
happen at the word, phrase, or clause level. The usual
way to join parallel structures is with the use of coordinating conjunctions
such as
"and" or "or."
Coordination Combining two equal (independent)
sentences with conjunctions such as and, but, or; nor; for; yet, so. The
point is to make clear that
the value of each idea is equal.
Subordination Combining two unequal sentences
such as a dependent clause with an independent clause with conjunctions such
as after,
although, before, unless, whenever and many others. Because,
the value of each idea is not equal, one idea supports or adds to another.
Repetition A writer uses
a particular word or phrase more than once to make a particular point in
order to impact or persuade the reader.
Figures of Speech Writers often use
common figures of speech such as similes and metaphors to connect with
the reader.
Grammatical and Mechanical
Fragment Fragments are incomplete sentences.
Usually, fragments are pieces of sentences that have become disconnected
from the main
clause. One of the easiest ways to correct them is to
remove the period between the fragment and the main clause. Other kinds of
punctuation may be needed for the newly combined sentence.
Run-On Run-on is a term
describing two independent clauses, which are joined together with no connecting
word or punctuation to separate the
clauses. For example, “They weren’t dangerous criminals
they were detectives in disguise” is incorrect. But, “They weren't dangerous
criminals; they were detectives in disguise” is correct.
Comma Splice A comma splice is the
use of a comma between two independent clauses. You can usually fix the error
by changing the comma to a
period and therefore making the two clauses into two separate
sentences, by changing the comma to a semicolon, or by making one clause
dependent by inserting a dependent marker word in front of it.
Pronoun antecedent Pronouns should
agree in number: If the pronoun takes the place of a singular noun, you have
to use a singular pronoun.
Pronouns also need to Agree in Person. If you are writing
in the "first person" ( I), don't confuse your reader by switching to the
"second
person" ( you) or "third person" (he, she, they, it, etc.).
Finally, pronouns should refer clearly to a specific noun.
Subject/Verb Agreement Subject and
Verbs must agree in number, i.e., plural noun needs a plural verb.
Verb Tense Changes in verb tense help
readers understand the temporal relationships among various narrated events.
But unnecessary or
inconsistent shifts in tense can cause confusion. Generally,
writers maintain one tense for the main discourse and indicate changes in
time
frame by changing tense relative to that primary tense,
which is usually either simple past or simple present. General guideline:
Do not shift
from one tense to another if the time frame for each action
or state is the same.
Spelling It is important
to keep a list of your most frequently misspelled words. Do not rely on spell
checkers—they won’t correct homonyms!
Commas There are four ways to use a
comma to clarify meaning: listing, linking, introducing and inserting.
Homonyms Many words sound alike and are often spelled
alike but mean different things.