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We are all born equally and I think it is wrong for
us to discriminate against someone just because they are different doesn't
mean they aren't good too. My grandfather was born in Mexico and he
moved to the U.S. when he was young. No matter how long we live here
we will always look different because we have dark skin and dark hair. Who
has the right to call themselves the true Americans?
When my grandfather came to this country he had to
work hard digging and stuff, and sometimes he got just enough money to buy
food for his mother and sisters. He was the
man of the family so every day he goes out to the corner to wait for someone
to come by to hire him. Now in days I see other men the
same as my grandfather. But sometimes the
men who hire him paid less then they say they would and he'd get mad but
couldn't do anything about it because they would report him to immigration.
Well, my grandmother was here already and her father
was a gardener who needed help, when my father went to work for him they
met and fell in love and got married and that's how my mother was born then
me.
I have lived in this country for three generations
now, but people still call me Mexican. I am not Mexican. I was
born here I am American as you or your neighbor. Just because I hae
brown skin doesn't mean I don't belong. There was someone in my high
school and her parents came here when she was two but they don't say she's
not American because she looks white and has blonde hair, but she wasn't
born here but in Russia. So I'm more American than her but some people
don't agree with that. Why not? Just because I have brown skin.
My grandfather worked very hard to make money to marry
my grandmother. He was a gardener at very big houses, and one owner
was a contractor and he hired him to work on a building because he was such
a hard worker and they would pay him ore money. Then they could get
married.
My grandmother was legal so she made my grandfather
legal when they got married, and when my mother was born she was legal too
and a naturel born American. Although she had brown skin and dark brown
hair like me.
My father was always here and so were his parents.
Only his grandparents came from guadalajara. He doesn't even
speak Spanish because he was born in Burbank and went to school there too.
He says he is one hundred percent American and so am I.
So in conclusion, just because someone is not white
does not mean that person is not really American.
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