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We are all born equally
and I think it is wrong for us to discriminate against someone just because
they are different doesn't mean they aren't good too. My
grandfather was born in Mexico and he moved to the U.S. when he was young.
No matter how long we live here we will always look different because
we have dark skin and dark hair. Who has the right to call themselves
the true Americans?
When my grandfather came to this country he had to
work hard digging and stuff, and sometimes he got just enough money to buy
food for his mother and sisters. He was the man of the family so every
day he goes out to the corner to wait for someone to come by to hire him.
Now in days I see other men the same as my grandfather. But
sometimes the men who hire him paid less then they say they would and he'd
get mad but coundn't do anything about it becuase they would report him to
immigration.
Well, my grandmother was here already and her father
was a gardener who needed help, when my father went to work for him they
met and fell in love and got married and that's how my mother was born then
me.
I have lived in this country for three generations
now, but people still call me Mexican. I am not Mexican. I was born here I am American as you or your neighbor.
Just because I hae brown skin doesn't mean I don't belong. There
was someone in my high school and her parents came here when she was two
but they don't say she's not American because she looks white and has blonde
hair, but she wasn't born here but in Russia. So I'm more American
than her but some people don't agree with that. Why not? Just
because I have brown skin.
My grandfather worked very hard to make money to marry
my grandmother. He was a gardener at very big houses, and one owner
was a contractor and he hired him to work on a building because he was such
a hard worker and they would pay him ore money. Then they could get
married.
My grandmother was legal so she made my grandfather
legal when they got married, and when my mother was born she was legal too
and a naturel born American. Although she had brown skin and dark brown
hair like me.
My father was always here and so were his parents.
Only his grandparents came from guadalajara. He doesn't even
speak Spanish because he was born in Burbank and went to school there too.
He says he is one hundred percent American and so am I.
So in conclusion, just because someone is not white
does not mean that person is not really American.
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