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We are all born equally
and I think it is wrong for us to discriminate against someone just because
they are different doesn't mean they aren't good too. My grandfather was born in Mexico
and he moved to the U.S. when he was young. No matter how long we live
here we will always look different because we have dark skin and dark hair.
Who has the right to call themselves the true Americans?
When my grandfather came to this country he had to work
hard digging and stuff, and sometimes he got just enough money to buy food
for his mother and sisters. He was the man of the family so every day
he goes out to the corner to wait for someone to come by to hire him. Now
in days I see other men the same as my grandfather. But sometimes the
men who hire him paid less then they say they would and he'd get mad but coundn't
do anything about it becuase they would report him to immigration.
Well, my grandmother was here already and her father
was a gardener who needed help, when my father went to work for him they met
and fell in love and got married and that's how my mother was born then me.
I have lived in this country for three generations now,
but people still call me Mexican. I am not Mexican. I was born
here I am American as you or your neighbor. Just because I hae brown
skin doesn't mean I don't belong. There was someone in my high school
and her parents came here when she was two but they don't say she's not American
because she looks white and has blonde hair, but she wasn't born here but
in Russia. So I'm more American than her but some people don't agree
with that. Why not? Just because I have brown skin.
My grandfather worked very hard to make money to marry
my grandmother. He was a gardener at very big houses, and one owner
was a contractor and he hired him to work on a building because he was such
a hard worker and they would pay him ore money. Then they could get
married.
My grandmother was legal so she made my grandfather
legal when they got married, and when my mother was born she was legal too
and a naturel born American. Although she had brown skin and dark brown
hair like me.
My father was always here and so were his parents. Only
his grandparents came from guadalajara. He doesn't even speak Spanish
because he was born in Burbank and went to school there too. He says
he is one hundred percent American and so am I.
So in conclusion, just because someone is not white
does not mean that person is not really American.
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