Pan African
Studies 350
Advanced Writing
Pan African
Studies Department
Fall Semester 2010
Ticket # 11489
Johnie H. Scott, M.A., M.F.A.
3 Units
Associate Professor of Pan African Studies
TTh, 2:00pm-3:15pm
Santa Susanna Hall Room 210
Manzanita Hall 112
Office Hours: TTh, 3:30pm-  5:00pm
Email
or by appointment
Prerequisites:
Completion of the Lower Division Writing requirement. Advanced course
emphasizing alternative strategies in expository writing skills development.
Focus on such purposeful forms of discourse as reports, the research paper,
critiques, the essay examination, and selected forms of correspondence. Cursory
review of grammar, mechanics and syntax is offered as needed. More intensive
review of such basics as available on an individual basis in the PAS Writing
Ceter. Course, though equivalent to, is not a substitute for ENGL 305 or BUS
305. Individual tutoring is available through the Pan African Studies Lab or
Learning Resource Center.
Required
Textbooks:
Course Student Learning Outcomes
(SLOs):
As a General Education course, there are six (6) defined SLOs for appropriate course title. Those generic SLOs are embedded in the following Pan African Studies Measurable Student Learning Outcomes:
SLO #1: Gain an understanding of the political, social-historical and cultural perspectives of the African American Experience in Africa and the African Diaspora.
· Analyze and compare perspective, meaning, and style in different texts, including those that reflect multicultural images and voices;
· Construct a theme or thesis and organize and develop a substantial, balanced and convincing defense of it in a voice, tone, language, and format (e.g., essay autobiography, report, editorial, case study, inquiry, and research) appropriate to the purpose of the writing;
· Use logical support, including informed opinion and fact, as well as their interpretations, to develop ideas, avoiding fallacies, biased language, and inappropriate tone;
SLO#2: Gain broad knowledge of the cultural, political and historical contexts in which the African and African American Experience took place.
· Analyze and compare perspective, meaning, and style in different texts, including those that reflect multicultural images and voices;
· Construct a theme or thesis and organize and develop a substantial, balanced and convincing defense of it in a voice, tone, language, and format (e.g., essay autobiography, report, editorial, case study, inquiry, and research) appropriate to the purpose of the writing;
· Use logical support, including informed opinion and fact, as well as their interpretations, to develop ideas, avoiding fallacies, biased language, and inappropriate tone;
SLO#3: Develop appropriate skills in research design and methodology used to examine the various interdisciplinary areas of the Pan African Studies Department curriculum.
· Demonstrate satisfactory competence in the conventions of Edited American English and the elements of presentation (including layout, format, and printing);
· Select and incorporate ideas derived from a variety of sources, such as library electronic and print resources, books, journals, the Internet, and interviews, and document them responsibly and correctly;
· Apply a variety of strategies for planning, outlining, drafting, revising and editing written work.
Grade Determination
Attendance and Participation  Per Class Meeting
Lab Work  As Assigned by Instructor for Rewrites and Revisions or
 elected by the student (i.e., PAS 099 Writers Workshop)
Moodle “Write Time” 4 Assignments (formerly WebCT) as Topics to be
  Determined by Instructor
  4 Postings + 8 Peer Responses
  2,000 Word Equivalency
Homework Assignments w/readings (as determined by instructor)
Writing Assignments 4 Assignments (i.e., Personal Narrative, Evaluative,
 Argument and Capstone Paper)
Portfolio  Includes Student Self Assessment “Essay”
 Must include all Progression Assignments
Course Requirements (i.e., the Student Portfolio):
The final
course grade is based upon that body of work – otherwise known as the Student
Portfolio – developed by the student as a direct result of the class. That Portfolio
has five components, each representing 20 percent of the course grade. These
components are each directly linked to the aforementioned SLOs stated for
Writing courses. Under each component may be found specific course requirements
that constitute primary grade factors averaged together in reaching the
cumulative grade point average for the student. Those five components are as
follows:
1.
The Writing Portfolio Assessment. The Portfolio is comprised of a
reflective essay, one timed essay examination (i.e., coming from the
Departmental Midterm or Common Essay Exams), two of the three assigned modes of
discourse chosen by the student with all revisions.
·
Timed Essay
Examinations: There are four timed
essay examinations of 50 minutes each given in this course – these being the
Pre-Semester, Midterm, Departmental Common and Self-Reflective Essays. The
student is to acquire large Blue Books (i.e., 8 ½”x11”) in order to take these
examinations. The Midterm and Departmental Common Essay are averaged together
as one component of the final course grade average. The Self-Reflective Essay
is graded separately. It is included in the Writing Portfolio as that
document’s required Reflective essay. No student shall receive a grade of
“C” or higher in this course who misses and fails to makeup the Midterm Essay,
the Departmental Common Essay, or the Self-Reflective Essay Exam. (No exceptions!);
·
Writing
Topics: Students in this class will
write and submit a total of three (3) essays within the modes of discourse –
the personal narrative, evaluative and the argumentative. These papers will be
written in standard manuscript format, typewritten, double-spaced with cover
pages. These papers will be rewritten and revised as deemed necessary by the
course instructor. Core readings for these writing assignments are determined
by the curse instructor but may come from the assigned course reader, in this
instance, Marian Wright Edelman’s collection of essays entitled The Sea Is
So Wide and My Boat Is So Small.
·
The Capstone
Paper: The assigned fictional work
for this section is the memoir Infidel by Ayaan Hirshi Ali Based upon
the student’s reading and research of this book and the issues raised therein
by its author, this critical analysis is to be written according to standard manuscript
format. This paper will combine the evaluative, analytical and argumentative
modes of discourse. As the capstone work for this “Advanced Writing” class, the
paper can be no less than 2,500
typewritten, double-spaced words (i.e., eight pages) with no less than fifteen (15) formal citations that include six (6)
quotes drawn from no less than three
(3) references other than Infidel The Capstone Paper must have a “Works
Cited” section done according to Modern Language Association guidelines. It is
to be submitted via email through Turnitin.com as a Microsoft Word attachment. Due
as noted in the course schedule, no student shall receive a grade of “B” or
higher in this class who fails to submit this paper – no exceptions!
Write Time (i.e., “Moodle”) Discussion Forums: The class has Internet Discussion Forums using Moodle
in which students participate in a dialogue – Write Time – wherein they made a
series of at least three (3) postings per discussion topic. There are a total
of four (4) Let’s Write forums for the semester. The first posting is the
student’s response to a question developed and directed by the course instructor
to the entire class. The remaining two postings are done by the student
indirect response to the comments made by two (2) classmates on the same
Discussion Forum Prompt. Students must make the three postings in order to
qualify for the maximum points, with each Write Time Forum valued on the 4.0
grade scale and then, finally, averaged together at the end of the term. These Write
Time Discussion Forums shall be open on average for a stated period of 3-4
weeks during which time the student makes his/her posting. No postings shall
count towards the student grade that are made after the Write Time Forum has
been closed (i.e., whether it is 30 minutes afterwards or one week later, in
either instance the student shall have failed to post during the appropriate
time period.). Write Time constitutes the fourth basic course requirement;
Collaborative Writer Project (CWP): All students participate in two (2) Collaborative
Writer Projects (CWP) for the semester – (1st) How to Write an
Argumentative Essay and (2nd)
The Modern Language Association Style Guide. The presentations are made using
PowerPoint with formal study guides prepared for the class. These CWPs are
averaged together in representing the fourth grade factor for the class. No
student may expect a grade of “B” or higher who fails to participate in these
CWPs which are formal group presentations of 25-30 minutes, with study guides
and discussion of assigned topics being made to the class. The Collaborative Writer Projects
represent the fifth basic course requirement;
Advanced Writing Diagnostic Test Results: Every student enrolled in this section undergoes
diagnostic skills testing in Vocabulary, Sentence Structure, Logical Relationships
and Usage. These diagnostic tests, developed by the College Entrance
Examination Board and Pearson Longman, are administered immediately upon
enrollment in the class and during the “Review” Week period at the end of term.
Students whose Post-Semester diagnostic test results show an improvement
over those at the beginning of the term will receive “Bonus” points per
each test, dependent upon level of improvement (i.e., percentage of gain);
Attendance. With regards to classroom attendance, the student who
achieves a record of perfect attendance for the semester (i.e., no
absences or tardies) will automatically receive “Bonus” points. The student
with no absences and no more than two (2) “Tardies” will be awarded .50 bonus
points at semester’s end. It is the student’s responsibility to account for
any and all absences with verifiable, documented evidence regarding the same;
Essay
Examination Revisions. Students will
earn bonuses for utilizing the Writing Specialists in either the PAS Writing
Center or the University Learning Resource Center with regards, specifically,
to revisions of the Pre-Semester and Midterm Examinations. The same
holds true for those formal writing assignments (i.e., the three assigned
papers) in the class. To merit these bonuses, the students must bring signature
verification of the same from either one of the Writing Centers with revisions
due as noted by the course instructor. The revisions are especially important
as they are key factors in the Portfolio Assessments done at the end of the
semester by the full Writing Program faculty.
Participation. Students can earn bonuses for exceptional in-class
performance on specific course material (i.e., homework, classroom
lectures, group presentations, et al) and "challenges" from the course
instructor. A student can also elect to memorize and then recite in class any
one of the following poems for Bonus Points: Langston Hughes, "Mother To Son,"
(1.0 pts.), Nikki Giovanni, "Ego Tripping" (1.25 pts.); Maya Angelou, "Still I
Rise," (1.50 pts.); and Margaret Walker, "For My People," (2.0 pts.); and
lastly,
Grading Policies:
Grading for the course is on a
“Plus-Minus” basis as described in the 2008-20010
CSUN Undergraduate and Graduate Catalogue. The final grade is based upon the
cumulative grade point average derived from the aforementioned primary grade
factors.. This data is then supplemented by Bonuses as assigned by the Course
Instructor with a Mean Average of the five primary requirements and any earned
bonuses. Final grading for this PAS 350 Advanced Writing class shall be as
follows:
“A” = 3.7-4.0;
“A-“= 3.5-3.69;
“B+” = 3.3-3.49;
“B” = 3.0-3.29;
“B-“= 2.7-2.99;
“C+” = 2.3-2.69;
“C” = 2.0-2.29;
“C-“= 1.7-1.99;
“D+” = 1.3-1.69;
“D” = 1.0-1.29;
“D-“= 0.7- 0.99;
and
“Fail” = 0.0- 0.69.
The grade of “Incomplete” shall
only be issued to those students doing passing work (i.e., “C” or better) who
are forced due to circumstances beyond their control – and subject to full
documentation – miss submitting the Exit Essay Examination and/or Case Study.
Statement on Academic Honesty:
In the event there are
violations of the Student Conduct Code with regards to Academic Dishonesty, the
student(s) shall be liable to any sanctions delineated in Section 41301, Title
V, and California Code of Regulations, for which any offending student may be
expelled, suspended, or given a less serious disciplinary sanction.
"Academic dishonesty is an especially serious offense and diminishes the
quality of scholarship and defrauds those who depend upon the integrity of
campus programs." ("Academic Dishonesty," CSUN Undergraduate and
Graduate Catalogue, 587-589).
Statement on Turnitin.Com:
In the final week of the course, the two written assignments in Moodle (i.e., the Exit Essay Examination and the Case Study) will use Turnitin to generate originality reports. Turnitin is plagiarism detection software that checks written papers for originality against a database of over 125 million papers; 90,000 journals, periodicals and books; and 13+ billion web pages. To receive more information on the features and capabilities of Turnitin, please visit their Website at http://www.turnitin.com.
“God, help our children to learn what is real. Help
them not to defer to people
Because they are powerful or rich but because they are
good or wise or helpful
Or loving.
Help them not to defer to people because they are
attractive or famous but because
They share a mission, a life view, a commitment to
something bigger than
Themselves.
Help them not to defer to people because of race or
gender but because they are
Principled and honest.
.”
-- Marian Wright Edelman, “A Letter to Young People:
Anchors and Sails for
Life’s Voyage”
From The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is
So Small
Chidlren’s Defense Fund Founder and President Marian
Edelman shown here at University of California at Santa Barbara forone of her
many nationwide speaking engagements.
Weeks 1-5 (August 23rd-
September 25th)
Week 1 (August 23rd-28th)
1. Tuesday,
August 24th
Course Orientation
2. Thursday,
August 26th
Pre-Semester Essay Exam
Reading: “Foreword”and “Letter to Parents” from The
Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small; “Foreword” and “Introduction” from Infidel.
Week 2 (August 30th-September 4th)
3. Tuesday,
August 31st
Pre-Diagnostic Testing (Logical Relationships and Usage)
4. Thursday,
September 2nd
Overview: The Group
Presentations with Group Assignments
Presentation: “Of ‘Write Time’ and
Moodle” (Kate Berggren, Office of
Online Instruction)
Reading: “A Letter t Parents” from The Sea Is So
Wide and My Boat Is So Small; Chapters 1-3 from Infidel.
Week 3 (September 6th-11th)
Note – Monday, September 6th, is Labor Day
– National Holiday – Campus is closed.
5. Tuesday,
September 7th
Orientation: Essay Examination
Rubric and Grading Policies
6. Thursday,
September 9th Field Work:
Group Presentation
Research for CWA#1 (Oviatt Library)
Reading: “A Letter to Neighbors and Community Leaders”
from The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small;
Chapters 4-6 from Infidel.
Week 4 (September 13th-18th)
7. Tuesday,
September 14th Peer
Critiques: “The Pre-
Semester Essay Examination”
(with return of Green Books
for Revisions due Thursday,
September 23rd)
Lecture: “The Principle of Unity
in Writing”
Homework #1 – The Opening and Closing Essay Gambits
Homework #2 – The 13 Keys to Effective Note-Taking
Homework #3 – The Looping Technique
8. Thursday,
September 16th Lecture:
“From The Principle
of Unity in Writing to Essay
Gambits”
Reading: “A Letter to Faith Leaders” and “A Letter to
Young
People: Anchors and Sails for Life’s
Voyage”
from The Sea
Is So Wide and My Boat Is So
Small;
Chapters 7-9 from Infidel.
PROGRESSION ONE [READING AND RESPONDING TO TEXTS]
Students will engage in a critical conversation that will require analysis and close reading of assigned texts. Marian Wright Edelman’s The Sea Is So Wide and y Boat Is So Small, will be the primary text used by the student in association with selected readings chosen by the instructor.
Exercise One (with assigned readings)
Exercise Two (with assigned readings e.g., Marian Wright Edelman’s “A Letter to Parents,” “A Letter to Neighbors and Community Leaders.”).)
Instructions for Essay One (i.e., the Letter)
Essay One, Draft One = Peer Review
Peer Group #1: Lyndsie Gooden, Charles Harris, Eniola Jose and Justin Marks. Peer Group #2: Jacquelyn Badejo, Luby Benton, Sophia Sheik, Aria Swanson and Lon Williams. Peer Group #3: Dathan Lyles, Rashaun McLemore. Gregory Pancho and Sara Tekle. Peer Group #4: Lenny Daniel, Robin Fox, Christopher Madison, Samantha Morin and Jonna Thompson. Peer Group #5: Kristyn Autry, Aja Franks, Brianna Hightower, Terrence Stewart and Sean Williams. Peer Group #6: Jeffory Alexander, Vincent McGhee, Samantha Vaughn and Samantha Wauls.
Essay One, Draft Two = Instructor Review
·
Let’s
Write #1 (Weeks 3-6)
·
HW#1
(Essay Gambits)< HW#2 (The 13 Keys to Listening Skills”), HW#3 (The Looping
Technique), HW#4 (The Cubing Technique) and HW#5 (The Track-Switching
Technique)
·
1st
Round of CWA’s: Everything Is an Argument, Chapters 1-4 (Groups 1-2, Tuesday,
September 28th, Groups 3-4, Thursday, September 30th and
Groups 5-6, October 5th)
Weeks 6-10 (September 27th – October 30th)
PROGRESSION TWO [ANALYSIS]
The world-famous Watts Towers of Simon Rodia
Students will develop an idea/theme/issue/topic through the use of objects, personal experience, and written text.
Exercise One (with assigned readings from the official Watts Towers web page and related materials)
Exercise Two (Based upon the utilization of "Space" as expressed in the student's selection from list of choices in either Los Angeles or the San Fernando Valley)
Instructions for
Essay Two (i.e., the Evaluative Essay)
Essay Two, Draft One = Peer Review (To take place in class on Thursday, November 4th. Students to email drafts of their WA#2 to Peer Critique group members by or before 7:00pm Tuesday, November 2nd)
Essay Two, Draft Two = Instructor Review (Based upon the revisions made by students of the WA#2 after workshopping the same in class in the Peer Critiques. The revised draft is due via email to the instructor by or before 5:00pm Monday, November 8th)
·
Midterm
Examinations: Essay and Objective (Weeks 8-9)
·
Write Time
#2 (September 24th-October 16th )
·
Write Time #3 (October 29th-November 19th))
Weeks 11-15 (November 1st – December 4th)
PROGRESSION THREE [ARGUMENT WITH
RESEARCH]
Progression Three
will culminate in the composition of an academic argument. Students should consider this assignment an
engagement with the positions and contributions of other scholars or
authorities on the problems that surfaced in New Orleans as direct result of Hurricane Katrina and the Great Flood of 2005 as shown in the award-winning documentary Trouble the Water.
Exercise One (with assigned readings)
Exercise Two (with assigned readings)
Instructions for
Essay Three (i.e., the Argument)
Essay Three, Draft One = Peer Review(Peer Review to take place, Tuesday, November 23rd with revised drafts emailed to the instructor by 7:00pm, Friday, November 26th)
Essay Three, Draft Two = Instructor Review
·
Final
Write Time #4 (November 19th-December 6th)
·
Second
Round of CWAs (Groups 1-2, Thursday, November 11th, Groups 3-4,
Tuesday, November 16th and Groups 5-6, Thursday, November 18th)
·
THE PROJECT ESSAY (The Capstone
Paper)
The Project Essay(i.e., the Capstone Paper) must be no less than 8 double-spaced pages (2,500 words).
Students will self-select from a category below. Work for THE PROJECT will begin after midterms (drafting, researching, revisioning, peer workshopping) and continue throughout the latter half of the semester.
The categories are:
PROJECT SPACE (OPTION ONE)
This project will analyze the diagramming of space. Space can be
defined as urban spaces, community spaces, personal spaces, campus spaces,
geographical spaces. This analysis will take into consideration race,
social economic class, geographic and political themes. One example of
this would be study of homelessness in Black America wherein students (Three
per group) would go to downtown Los Angeles, visiting and working with homeless
shelters. Reading for this selection would include, for example, The Soloist
by Steve Lopez.
This project will result in an academic essay as well as providing students the opportunity to present their findings in a class presentation. This assignment can be presented as a group project (to be determined by instructor).
Project Space provides an opportunity for students to gather research material through self-guided field trips (analyzing “space” as it is themed in the final product).
Project Space should culminate in at least 2,100 words and must engage in draft (revision) processing.
PROJECT TEXT (OPTION TWO)
This project will focus on issues (i.e., construction of race) and will
require students to analyze and interpret text through close
readings, references, and research on focal issues. Text is
defined by novel, short stories, plays, films, music, images, poetry, and so
forth. Instructors will define “text” as
appropriate for the themes of individual course designs. Reading for this
selection would include, for example, the Ayaan Hirshi Ali memoir Infidel
that correlates to the SLOs of the Pan African Studies Department.
Project Text will allow students to explore the larger implications of the subject of analysis (larger implications as defined and practiced in the Progression exercises).
Project Text will also allow students to move comprehensively and critically into the final research paper (with an argumentative approach).
Project Text should culminate in at least 2,100 words and must engage in draft (revision) processing.
REFLECTIVE ESSAY
Week 16 (December
6th-11th)
·
Each student meets with Course Instructor for Writing Portfolio
Conference to include return of said document which will also include the
Departmental Common Essay Examination. Students complete Post-Semester
Diagnostic Testing in Logical Relationships and Usage.