Pan African Studies 350

Advanced Writing

Pan African Studies Department

California State University, Northridge

Fall Semester 2010

 

Ticket # 11489                                                                                                                                                                     Johnie H. Scott, M.A., M.F.A.

3 Units                                                                                                                                                                                  Associate Professor of Pan                                                                                                                                                                                                                 African Studies

TTh, 2:00pm-3:15pm                                                                                                                                                          Santa Susanna Hall Room 210

Manzanita Hall 112                                                                                                                                                             Office Hours: TTh, 3:30pm-                                                                                                                                                                                                                5:00pm

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Course Syllabus

Description:

 

Prerequisites: Completion of the Lower Division Writing requirement. Advanced course emphasizing alternative strategies in expository writing skills development. Focus on such purposeful forms of discourse as reports, the research paper, critiques, the essay examination, and selected forms of correspondence. Cursory review of grammar, mechanics and syntax is offered as needed. More intensive review of such basics as available on an individual basis in the PAS Writing Ceter. Course, though equivalent to, is not a substitute for ENGL 305 or BUS 305. Individual tutoring is available through the Pan African Studies Lab or Learning Resource Center.

 

Required Textbooks:

 

  1. Ali, Ayaan Hirsi, with Foreword by Christopher Hitchens, Infidel, Simon & Schuster, New York, NY, ©  2007;
  2. Edelman, Marian Wright, The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small: Charting a Course for the Next Generation, Hyperion, New York, NY © 2008;
  3. Gibaldi, Joseph, The MLA Handbook to Writers of Research Papers/7th Edition, Modern Language Association of America, New York, NY;Miller, George E., The Prentince Hall Reader/9th Edition, .Allyn & Bacon, New York, New York © 2009;
  4. Lunsford, Andrea A. and John Ruszkiewiz, everything’s an argument, beford/st. martin’s press, Upper Saddle River, NJ, © 2010;
  5. Merriam-Webster, Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary, Eleventh Edition, An Encyclopedia Brittanica Company, © 2003;

 

Course Student Learning Outcomes (SLOs):

 

As a General Education course, there are six (6) defined SLOs for appropriate course title.  Those generic SLOs are embedded in the following Pan African Studies Measurable Student Learning Outcomes:

 

SLO #1: Gain an understanding of the political, social-historical and cultural perspectives of the African American Experience in Africa and the African Diaspora.

 

·         Analyze and compare perspective, meaning, and style in different texts, including those that reflect multicultural images and voices;

 

·         Construct a theme or thesis and organize and develop a substantial, balanced and convincing defense of it in a voice, tone, language, and format (e.g., essay autobiography, report, editorial, case study, inquiry, and research) appropriate to the purpose of the writing;

 

·         Use logical support, including informed opinion and fact, as well as their interpretations, to develop ideas, avoiding fallacies, biased language, and inappropriate tone;

 

 

 

SLO#2: Gain broad knowledge of the cultural, political and historical contexts in which the African and African American Experience took place.

 

·         Analyze and compare perspective, meaning, and style in different texts, including those that reflect multicultural images and voices;

 

·         Construct a theme or thesis and organize and develop a substantial, balanced and convincing defense of it in a voice, tone, language, and format (e.g., essay autobiography, report, editorial, case study, inquiry, and research) appropriate to the purpose of the writing;

 

·         Use logical support, including informed opinion and fact, as well as their interpretations, to develop ideas, avoiding fallacies, biased language, and inappropriate tone;

 

 

SLO#3: Develop appropriate skills in research design and methodology used to examine the various interdisciplinary areas of the Pan African Studies Department curriculum.

 

·         Demonstrate satisfactory competence in the conventions of Edited American English and the elements of presentation (including layout, format, and printing);

 

·         Select and incorporate ideas derived from a variety of sources, such as library electronic and print resources, books, journals, the Internet, and interviews, and document them responsibly and correctly;

 

·         Apply a variety of strategies for planning, outlining, drafting, revising and editing written work.

 

Grade Determination

 

Attendance and Participation                                                                                      Per Class Meeting

 

Lab Work                                                                                                                      As Assigned by Instructor for Rewrites and Revisions or

                                                                                                                                         elected by the student (i.e., PAS 099 Writers Workshop)

 

Moodle  “Write Time”                                                                                                   4 Assignments (formerly WebCT) as Topics to be

                                                                                                                                        Determined by Instructor

                                                                                                                                        4 Postings + 8 Peer Responses

                                                                                                                                        2,000 Word Equivalency

 

Homework                                                                                                                     Assignments w/readings (as determined by instructor)

 

Writing Assignments                                                                                                     4 Assignments (i.e., Personal Narrative, Evaluative,

                                                                                                                                        Argument and Capstone Paper)

 

Portfolio                                                                                                                         Includes Student Self Assessment “Essay”

                                                                            Must include all Progression Assignments

 

Course Requirements (i.e., the Student Portfolio):

 

The final course grade is based upon that body of work – otherwise known as the Student Portfolio – developed by the student as a direct result of the class. That Portfolio has five components, each representing 20 percent of the course grade. These components are each directly linked to the aforementioned SLOs stated for Writing courses. Under each component may be found specific course requirements that constitute primary grade factors averaged together in reaching the cumulative grade point average for the student. Those five components are as follows:

 

1.      The Writing Portfolio Assessment. The Portfolio is comprised of a reflective essay, one timed essay examination (i.e., coming from the Departmental Midterm or Common Essay Exams), two of the three assigned modes of discourse chosen by the student with all revisions.

·         Timed Essay Examinations: There are four timed essay examinations of 50 minutes each given in this course – these being the Pre-Semester, Midterm, Departmental Common and Self-Reflective Essays. The student is to acquire large Blue Books (i.e., 8 ½”x11”) in order to take these examinations. The Midterm and Departmental Common Essay are averaged together as one component of the final course grade average. The Self-Reflective Essay is graded separately. It is included in the Writing Portfolio as that document’s required Reflective essay. No student shall receive a grade of “C” or higher in this course who misses and fails to makeup the Midterm Essay, the Departmental Common Essay, or the Self-Reflective Essay Exam.  (No exceptions!);

 

·         Writing Topics: Students in this class will write and submit a total of three (3) essays within the modes of discourse – the personal narrative, evaluative and the argumentative. These papers will be written in standard manuscript format, typewritten, double-spaced with cover pages. These papers will be rewritten and revised as deemed necessary by the course instructor. Core readings for these writing assignments are determined by the curse instructor but may come from the assigned course reader, in this instance, Marian Wright Edelman’s collection of essays entitled The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small.

 

·         The Capstone Paper: The assigned fictional work for this section is the memoir Infidel by Ayaan Hirshi Ali Based upon the student’s reading and research of this book and the issues raised therein by its author, this critical analysis is to be written according to standard manuscript format. This paper will combine the evaluative, analytical and argumentative modes of discourse. As the capstone work for this “Advanced Writing” class, the paper can be no less than 2,500 typewritten, double-spaced words (i.e., eight pages) with no less than fifteen (15) formal citations that include six (6) quotes drawn from no less than three (3) references other than Infidel The Capstone Paper must have a “Works Cited” section done according to Modern Language Association guidelines. It is to be submitted via email through Turnitin.com as a Microsoft Word attachment. Due as noted in the course schedule, no student shall receive a grade of “B” or higher in this class who fails to submit this paper – no exceptions!

 

  1. Examinations. This is the second of the five components used in grading the class. The objective exams consist of the Midterm Examination and the Self-Reflective Essay with these averaged together. The two assessments are based directly upon the materials used in the class to include any homework assignments, lectures, group presentations, assigned readings or directed notes from the instructor. This first set of examinations is factored directly as 20 percent of the final course grade.

 

  1. Homework: The third component in this course is that of the assigned homework. The PAS 350 homework covers a number of areas ranging from opening and closing essay gambits, listening and note-taking skills to analysis of nonfiction and fiction. As with the other components, this third grading factor counts or 20 percent of the final course grade. To qualify for an honor grade in this class of “B” or higher, the student must achieve a grade average of at least 2.3 on the homework – No exceptions!

 

  1. Academic Information Competency. The fastest-growing dimension of academic growth and innovation in the last two decades involves the Internet and wireless technology. From laptop computers to cell phones equipped word processing and email to “smart” classrooms to video conferencing and “threaded” web-based discussion groups, the reach of the Information Age can be seen and felt. The 350 Advanced Writing class makes sure usage of the technology with students emailing homework and writing assignments, doing web-based research and mastering the University’s Moodle portal for classroom discussions. This fourth component of the Advanced Writing course also carries a weight of 20% of the final course grade primarily derived from the Write Time Discussion Forums.

 

Write Time (i.e., “Moodle”) Discussion Forums: The class has Internet Discussion Forums using Moodle in which students participate in a dialogue – Write Time – wherein they made a series of at least three (3) postings per discussion topic. There are a total of four (4) Let’s Write forums for the semester. The first posting is the student’s response to a question developed and directed by the course instructor to the entire class. The remaining two postings are done by the student indirect response to the comments made by two (2) classmates on the same Discussion Forum Prompt. Students must make the three postings in order to qualify for the maximum points, with each Write Time Forum valued on the 4.0 grade scale and then, finally, averaged together at the end of the term. These Write Time Discussion Forums shall be open on average for a stated period of 3-4 weeks during which time the student makes his/her posting. No postings shall count towards the student grade that are made after the Write Time Forum has been closed (i.e., whether it is 30 minutes afterwards or one week later, in either instance the student shall have failed to post during the appropriate time period.). Write Time constitutes the fourth basic course requirement;

 

  1. Formal Group Presentations. The fifth and final grading component measures the student’s ability to work with others in researching, creating and then making formal group presentations on assigned topics drawn from Andrea Lunsford’s everything’s an argument and Joseph Gibaldi’s MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers. This component calls not only for application of research and written communication skills. It also calls for, enhances and emphasizes those interpersonal communication skills so vital to academic and professional discourse. In this 350 Advanced Writing course, this component is centered upon Collaborative Writer Projects that are done twice during the semester by the student and it, too, represents 20 percent of the final course grade.

 

Collaborative Writer Project (CWP): All students participate in two (2) Collaborative Writer Projects (CWP) for the semester – (1st) How to Write an Argumentative Essay  and (2nd) The Modern Language Association Style Guide. The presentations are made using PowerPoint with formal study guides prepared for the class. These CWPs are averaged together in representing the fourth grade factor for the class. No student may expect a grade of “B” or higher who fails to participate in these CWPs which are formal group presentations of 25-30 minutes, with study guides and discussion of assigned topics being made to the class. The Collaborative Writer Projects represent the fifth basic course requirement;

 

  1. Earned Bonus Points. Bonus points are added to the basic grade point average derived from the five “basic” grade factors and then divided by that same number (i.e., 5) in reaching the “cumulative” grade point average (GPA) for the course. Those “bonus” considerations are given according to the instructor’s discretion but would include:

 

Advanced Writing Diagnostic Test Results: Every student enrolled in this section undergoes diagnostic skills testing in Vocabulary, Sentence Structure, Logical Relationships and Usage. These diagnostic tests, developed by the College Entrance Examination Board and Pearson Longman, are administered immediately upon enrollment in the class and during the “Review” Week period at the end of term. Students whose Post-Semester diagnostic test results show an improvement over those at the beginning of the term will receive “Bonus” points per each test, dependent upon level of improvement (i.e., percentage of gain);

 

Attendance. With regards to classroom attendance, the student who achieves a record of perfect attendance for the semester (i.e., no absences or tardies) will automatically receive “Bonus” points. The student with no absences and no more than two (2) “Tardies” will be awarded .50 bonus points at semester’s end. It is the student’s responsibility to account for any and all absences with verifiable, documented evidence regarding the same;

 

Essay Examination Revisions. Students will earn bonuses for utilizing the Writing Specialists in either the PAS Writing Center or the University Learning Resource Center with regards, specifically, to revisions of the Pre-Semester and Midterm Examinations. The same holds true for those formal writing assignments (i.e., the three assigned papers) in the class. To merit these bonuses, the students must bring signature verification of the same from either one of the Writing Centers with revisions due as noted by the course instructor. The revisions are especially important as they are key factors in the Portfolio Assessments done at the end of the semester by the full Writing Program faculty.

 

Participation. Students can earn bonuses for exceptional in-class performance on specific course material (i.e., homework, classroom lectures, group presentations, et al) and "challenges" from the course instructor. A student can also elect to memorize and then recite in class any one of the following poems for Bonus Points: Langston Hughes, "Mother To Son," (1.0 pts.), Nikki Giovanni, "Ego Tripping" (1.25 pts.); Maya Angelou, "Still I Rise," (1.50 pts.); and Margaret Walker, "For My People," (2.0 pts.); and lastly,

"When For My People by Margaret Walker won the Yale Series of Younger Poets Award in 1942, "she became one of the youngest Black writers ever to have published a volume of poetry in this century," as well as "the first Black woman in American literary history to be so honored in a prestigious national competition," noted Richard K. Barksdale in Black American Poets between Worlds, 1940-1960." (Poetry Foundation.com)

 

Grading Policies:

Grading for the course is on a “Plus-Minus” basis as described in the 2008-20010 CSUN Undergraduate and Graduate Catalogue. The final grade is based upon the cumulative grade point average derived from the aforementioned primary grade factors.. This data is then supplemented by Bonuses as assigned by the Course Instructor with a Mean Average of the five primary requirements and any earned bonuses. Final grading for this PAS 350 Advanced Writing class shall be as follows:

 

A” = 3.7-4.0;

A-“= 3.5-3.69;

B+” = 3.3-3.49;

B” = 3.0-3.29;

B-“= 2.7-2.99;

C+” = 2.3-2.69;

C” = 2.0-2.29;

C-“= 1.7-1.99;

D+” = 1.3-1.69;

D” = 1.0-1.29;

D-“= 0.7- 0.99;

and

Fail” = 0.0- 0.69.

 

The grade of “Incomplete” shall only be issued to those students doing passing work (i.e., “C” or better) who are forced due to circumstances beyond their control – and subject to full documentation – miss submitting the Exit Essay Examination and/or Case Study.

Statement on Academic Honesty:

In the event there are violations of the Student Conduct Code with regards to Academic Dishonesty, the student(s) shall be liable to any sanctions delineated in Section 41301, Title V, and California Code of Regulations, for which any offending student may be expelled, suspended, or given a less serious disciplinary sanction. "Academic dishonesty is an especially serious offense and diminishes the quality of scholarship and defrauds those who depend upon the integrity of campus programs." ("Academic Dishonesty," CSUN Undergraduate and Graduate Catalogue, 587-589).

 

Statement on Turnitin.Com:

In the final week of the course, the two written assignments in Moodle (i.e., the Exit Essay Examination and the Case Study) will use Turnitin to generate originality reports. Turnitin is plagiarism detection software that checks written papers for originality against a database of over 125 million papers; 90,000 journals, periodicals and books; and 13+ billion web pages.  To receive more information on the features and capabilities of Turnitin, please visit their Website at http://www.turnitin.com.

 

Course Schedule

 

“God, help our children to learn what is real. Help them not to defer to people

Because they are powerful or rich but because they are good or wise or helpful

Or loving.

 

Help them not to defer to people because they are attractive or famous but because

They share a mission, a life view, a commitment to something bigger than

Themselves.

 

Help them not to defer to people because of race or gender but because they are

Principled and honest.

.”

-- Marian Wright Edelman, “A Letter to Young People: Anchors and Sails for

Life’s Voyage”

From The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small

 

Chidlren’s Defense Fund Founder and President Marian Edelman shown here at University of California at Santa Barbara forone of her many nationwide speaking engagements.

 

Weeks 1-5 (August 23rd- September 25th)

 

Week 1 (August 23rd-28th)

1.    Tuesday, August 24th                    Course Orientation

2.    Thursday, August 26th                  Pre-Semester Essay Exam

Reading: “Foreword”and “Letter to Parents” from The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small; “Foreword” and “Introduction” from Infidel.

 

Week 2 (August 30th-September 4th)

 

3.    Tuesday, August 31st                    Pre-Diagnostic Testing (Logical Relationships and Usage)

4.    Thursday, September 2nd           Overview: The Group

                                         Presentations with Group Assignments

                                         Presentation: “Of ‘Write Time’ and

                                                     Moodle” (Kate Berggren, Office of

                                                                         Online Instruction)

Reading: “A Letter t Parents” from The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small; Chapters 1-3 from Infidel.

 

Week 3 (September 6th-11th)

Note – Monday, September 6th, is Labor Day – National Holiday – Campus is closed.

5.    Tuesday, September 7th      Orientation: Essay Examination

                                                               Rubric and Grading Policies

6.    Thursday, September 9th    Field Work: Group Presentation

                                             Research for CWA#1 (Oviatt Library)

Reading: “A Letter to Neighbors and Community Leaders”

                     from The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So Small;

                     Chapters 4-6 from Infidel.

 

Week 4 (September 13th-18th)

7.    Tuesday, September 14th      Peer Critiques: “The Pre-

                                                             Semester Essay Examination”

                                                             (with return of Green Books

                                                               for Revisions due  Thursday,

                                                               September 23rd)

                                                         Lecture: “The Principle of Unity

                                                                             in Writing”

Homework #1 – The Opening and Closing Essay Gambits

Homework #2 – The 13 Keys to Effective Note-Taking

Homework #3 – The Looping Technique

 

8.    Thursday, September 16th     Lecture: “From The Principle

                                                                  of Unity in Writing to Essay

                                                                  Gambits”

Reading: “A Letter to Faith Leaders” and “A Letter to Young

                                People: Anchors and Sails for Life’s Voyage”

                                from The Sea Is So Wide and My Boat Is So

                                Small; Chapters 7-9 from Infidel.

 

PROGRESSION ONE [READING AND RESPONDING TO TEXTS]

 

Students will engage in a critical conversation that will require analysis and close reading of assigned texts. Marian Wright Edelman’s The Sea Is So Wide and y Boat Is So Small, will be the primary text used by the student in association with selected readings chosen by the instructor.

 

 

Exercise One (with assigned readings)

 

Exercise Two (with assigned readings e.g., Marian Wright Edelman’s “A Letter to Parents,”  “A Letter to Neighbors and Community Leaders.”).)

           

Instructions for Essay One (i.e., the Letter)

 

Essay One, Draft One = Peer Review

Peer Group #1: Lyndsie Gooden, Charles Harris, Eniola Jose and Justin Marks. Peer Group #2: Jacquelyn Badejo, Luby Benton, Sophia Sheik, Aria Swanson and Lon Williams. Peer Group #3: Dathan Lyles, Rashaun McLemore. Gregory Pancho and Sara Tekle. Peer Group #4: Lenny Daniel, Robin Fox, Christopher Madison, Samantha Morin and Jonna Thompson. Peer Group #5: Kristyn Autry, Aja Franks, Brianna Hightower, Terrence Stewart and Sean Williams. Peer Group #6: Jeffory Alexander, Vincent McGhee, Samantha Vaughn and Samantha Wauls.

Essay One, Draft Two = Instructor Review

 

·         Let’s Write #1 (Weeks 3-6)

·         HW#1 (Essay Gambits)< HW#2 (The 13 Keys to Listening Skills”), HW#3 (The Looping Technique), HW#4 (The Cubing Technique) and HW#5 (The Track-Switching Technique)

·         1st Round of CWA’s: Everything Is an Argument, Chapters 1-4 (Groups 1-2, Tuesday, September 28th, Groups 3-4, Thursday, September 30th and Groups 5-6, October 5th)

 

Weeks 6-10 (September 27th – October 30th)

 

PROGRESSION TWO [ANALYSIS]

 

The world-famous Watts Towers of Simon Rodia

 

Students will develop an idea/theme/issue/topic through the use of objects, personal experience, and written text.

 

Exercise One (with assigned readings from the official Watts Towers web page and related materials)

                       

 

Exercise Two (Based upon the utilization of "Space" as expressed in the student's selection from list of choices in either Los Angeles or the San Fernando Valley)

 

Instructions for Essay Two (i.e., the Evaluative Essay)

 

Essay Two, Draft One = Peer Review (To take place in class on Thursday, November 4th. Students to email drafts of their WA#2 to Peer Critique group members by or before 7:00pm Tuesday, November 2nd)

Essay Two, Draft Two = Instructor Review (Based upon the revisions made by students of the WA#2 after workshopping the same in class in the Peer Critiques. The revised draft is due via email to the instructor by or before 5:00pm Monday, November 8th)

 

·         Midterm Examinations: Essay and Objective (Weeks 8-9)

·         Write Time #2 (September 24th-October 16th )

·         Write Time #3 (October 29th-November 19th))

 

Weeks 11-15 (November 1st – December 4th)

 

PROGRESSION THREE [ARGUMENT WITH RESEARCH]

Progression Three will culminate in the composition of an academic argument.  Students should consider this assignment an engagement with the positions and contributions of other scholars or authorities on the problems that surfaced in New Orleans as direct result of Hurricane Katrina and the Great Flood of 2005 as shown in the award-winning documentary Trouble the Water.

 

Exercise One (with assigned readings)

 

Exercise Two (with assigned readings)

 

 

Instructions for Essay Three (i.e., the Argument)

 

Essay Three, Draft One = Peer Review(Peer Review to take place, Tuesday, November 23rd with revised drafts emailed to the instructor by 7:00pm, Friday, November 26th)

Essay Three, Draft Two = Instructor Review

 

·         Final Write Time #4 (November 19th-December 6th)

·         Second Round of CWAs (Groups 1-2, Thursday, November 11th, Groups 3-4, Tuesday, November 16th and Groups 5-6, Thursday, November 18th)

·          

 

THE PROJECT ESSAY (The Capstone Paper)

 

The Project Essay(i.e., the Capstone Paper) must be no less than 8 double-spaced pages (2,500 words).

 

Students will self-select from a category below.  Work for THE PROJECT will begin after midterms (drafting, researching, revisioning, peer workshopping) and continue throughout the latter half of the semester. 

 

The categories are:

 

           

PROJECT SPACE (OPTION ONE)

 

This project will analyze the diagramming of space.  Space can be defined as urban spaces, community spaces, personal spaces, campus spaces, geographical spaces.  This analysis will take into consideration race, social economic class, geographic and political themes.  One example of this would be study of homelessness in Black America wherein students (Three per group) would go to downtown Los Angeles, visiting and working with homeless shelters. Reading for this selection would include, for example, The Soloist by Steve Lopez.

 

This project will result in an academic essay as well as providing students the opportunity to present their findings in a class presentation.  This assignment can be presented as a group project (to be determined by instructor).

 

Project Space provides an opportunity for students to gather research material through self-guided field trips (analyzing “space” as it is themed in the final product).

 

Project Space should culminate in at least 2,100 words and must engage in draft (revision) processing.

 

 

PROJECT TEXT (OPTION TWO)

 

 

This project will focus on issues (i.e., construction of race) and will require students to analyze and interpret text through close readings, references, and research on focal issues.  Text is defined by novel, short stories, plays, films, music, images, poetry, and so forth.  Instructors will define “text” as appropriate for the themes of individual course designs. Reading for this selection would include, for example, the Ayaan Hirshi Ali memoir Infidel that correlates to the SLOs of the Pan African Studies Department.

 

Project Text will allow students to explore the larger implications of the subject of analysis (larger implications as defined and practiced in the Progression exercises). 

 

Project Text will also allow students to move comprehensively and critically into the final research paper (with an argumentative approach).

 

Project Text should culminate in at least 2,100 words and must engage in draft (revision) processing.

 

REFLECTIVE ESSAY

 

 

Week 16     (December 6th-11th)

 

·         Each student meets with Course Instructor for Writing Portfolio Conference to include return of said document which will also include the Departmental Common Essay Examination. Students complete Post-Semester Diagnostic Testing in Logical Relationships and Usage.